Short story 3rd C

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  1. Title:The silence of the storm

    Names: Daniela Gil Estela & Mauricio Guzmán.

    I was sitting in the dining room looking througt the window at the cloudy sky that theatened storm. I felt the humidity in the air advancing the downpour that would undoubtedly fall. Suddendly, a ligtning illuninated everything leaving that feeling of fear that it always leaves. The thunder did not take long to arrive and almost at the same time the rain started. I saw people running. The birds returning to their nests as if they were looking for protection. It rained long hours and the wind whistled, the clouds ran fast after something unknown. It didn't take too long until, suddenly, the calm returned. The moon behind the cloud, empty, stillness and peacefully covered everything. The storm has finished

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  2. From the city to the countryside
    Name's: Sebastián González
    Valentina Godoy

    Thiara is a teenager of 15 years and is about to witness one of the most dramatic changes in her life. Her family decides to emigrate to the countryside, in search of a healthier and quieter life. For thiara, it was a bad idea, since she would leave her childhood friends. These are endless emotional changes within your head and on the outside you only show neutrality. Her parents notice the strangeness of thiara, since she began to isolate everything and everyone. For this reason, they decided to tale to her. The parents have found the problem and decide to find a solution. One day, thiara goes to the cinema with her friend. They return to their nome at 5:00 in the afternoon and upon entering their home they take the pleasant surprise of her friend and family. During the party, even thiara was kind of afflicted and it is at that time that her friends give her gift and a letter with a meaningful phrase "neither distance nor time could break our friendship". And a last surprise, everyone will visit twice a month or she will have to visit them. 30 years have passed and even the distance and time have not broken the promise of those young friend.

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  3. Title: blood for blood, fat Byron.
    Names: Paulina Aciares & Isaías Bustos.
    Story:
    A three-legged cat and one eye missing from the right side of the face called Newt, went to Doña Florinda's house every day to steal food since he was dying of hunger.
    That same afternoon, he went so quiet down the street without knowing that Doña Florinda's dog would come to try to tear him into pieces. Then, very astute, Newt gives him poisoned meat and the cursed dog dies. After seeing him dead, he recalled everything that damn dog did to him: How he ripped the right hind leg and how he scratched his face ripping his eye.
    At night, Doña Florinda found the dog dead. She between tears, exclaimed "Aaaaah, my dear Byron, who did this to you?".
    A week had gone by and the cat continued to go to Doña Florinda's house she felt very lonely and decided to adopt Newt. The cat was very happy he threw himself on his feet and began to purr. Doña Florinda was moved, took Newt in her arms and he licked her cheek Florinda kissed his forehead and left him on the floor again.
    As the days passed, Newt listened every night as Doña Florinda cried for her dog. He felt guilty for killing Byron. This made Newt decide to take the same poison that he had given to the dog. Then, he went to lie down at the feet of Doña Florinda to wait...

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  4. Title:friends or something else
    Names: scarlette fredes y kelly zúñiga.
    Story: a few years ago, a childhood friend visited me constantly at my house and most of the weekday we spent the day on the terrace talking about life. Since my whimsy was the terrace, i slept on a couple of mattresses that I reused when people condition. I had a sofa for visitors and a cd recorder that, at this time, it was a privilege I had a dresser and my desk that accompanied me from childhood when I was only ten years old. late he and I were sitting notin the visitors chair but in bed listening to music as we usually do, I was inspired and conspired in the melody of the song and my friend was sitting at the right of my bed. I felt suddenly that he was starring at me so I asked him what happens. He told me I have very nice features to see. With the index finger of hishand,he performed a kind of cide in which he said: this is the part I like most about your face. I do not remember what happened afrerwards but I called him the attention that fter what happend was bit the only friend who stressed me the beautifull features of my face and whit a single click I kept me face in his camera.

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  5. Title: Love without condition

    Names: Jimena Andagua & Noemi Llao

    While i was getting ready, i thought about the times we spent together 5 years ago, i thought that love was different because when. I was a child they told me that everything was perfect and it was like that.

    On my way to church with my father, i was nervous because he was my first love and all the memories that we have had come to my mind. When i arrived to the church, i saw everyone outside and i with a smile when seeing my family and friends present.

    When he come down, he greeted all the guests, walking towards the door of the church. I did not see him. I felt worried because i thought something had hapenned to him. But, as the hours passed, i realized that it was not like that.

    After spending hours, they started calling him but he did not answer and that is where i decided to go and look for him at his parents` house.

    He knocked at the door, i am yelled at me to leave because he did not love me anymore.
    I decided to take my things and leave the country. Days later, i found out from relatives that. I had on overdose that day, but in spite of that. I did not want to see hi over the years, i managed to forget it and i realized that love was not as we were told when i was a girl.

    It is like a flower that if one does not water it, it does not Bloom and it withers and it is the same. Things that happens with love.

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  6. INNOCENCE
    Some time ago, an angel a fell in love with beautiful human. But god, realizing what happens banished him from heaven. The angel desesperate to feel what the humans feel, he asked for help and they sald that he has to kill a women to get what he creaved. The angel decided to search the women that has the characteristics that they had indicated. He searched for years to that woman but he didn't find her until the day arrived and he found her. But he couldn't kill her. She wasn't guilty for what he wanted. He decided to ward off to hot to hurt her. But the girl, very curious, started talking to him. He, nervous, simply ignores it. He wants to protect her. He doesn't want to hurt her, because there are more angels looking for that young woman to kill her. Then, he decides to take care of her. But, every time they speak, they desire esch other hore and more. They wanted to know esch other. They had a lot of confidence or so he thought. He didn't know that that woman was also an angel and that what she was looking for was simply to harm him and that he couldn't get what he wanted. She wanted to kill him so he couldn't get what he longed.

    Belén Catalán
    Jennifer Montecino

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  7. I walk to the new school, eager to meet new people and also make many friends. When I arrived, I did not see that everyone was dressed in the same way, I found it very strange since they were all the same, even their hair! Do not take much importance. On the way to the door of the institute a girl approached me asking me to register, also telling me that my attire was not suitable for the institute, I asked him what was wrong? And she told me that I was not suitable with the rules dictated by the institute and I also let my hair should be dark, not blonde, that's what a girl comes up to and asks what was happening, the girl with whom she was softly tells her that I did not want to respect the rules, in that he looks at me, without emotion in his face, he began to immerse me from nothing, I did not know what was happening, he took my cell phone and told me that he would return them to me at the end of classes.
    When I finished classes I went to look for my things and I went to my house, thinking about that girl because I had that face without emotion, arriving home I greeted my mother she was cosinating and she told me that today I would meet my new sister, in that they knock on the door, I measured it to make it but my mother went ahead and there was that I saw her, my mother preached it to me but I told her that I already knew her and I shouted that she was grabbing aq

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  8. Nicolas Ortiz Marín y valentina grabusI walk to the new school, eager to meet new people and also make many friends. When I arrived, I did not see that everyone was dressed in the same way, I found it very strange since they were all the same, even their hair! Do not take much importance. On the way to the door of the institute a girl approached me asking me to register, also telling me that my attire was not suitable for the institute, I asked him what was wrong? And she told me that I was not suitable with the rules dictated by the institute and I also let my hair should be dark, not blonde, that's what a girl comes up to and asks what was happening, the girl with whom she was softly tells her that I did not want to respect the rules, in that he looks at me, without emotion in his face, he began to immerse me from nothing, I did not know what was happening, he took my cell phone and told me that he would return them to me at the end of classes.
    When I finished classes I went to look for my things and I went to my house, thinking about that girl because I had that face without emotion, arriving home I greeted my mother she was cosinating and she told me that today I would meet my new sister, in that they knock on the door, I measured it to make it but my mother went ahead and there was that I saw her, my mother preached it to me but I told her that I already knew her and I shouted that she was grabbing aq

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  9. titulo: Crazy story of a guitar
    Nombres: Tomas Arraño ,Mario Cerón,Patricio Madrid

    Last week, Mario went to buy his guitar in Plaza Maipu,
    He found the square a charming place. It was because his friend "accidentally" breaks his guitar, four months have passed since his friends told him he was going to pay for the guitar, he entered the shop and, suddenly, next to a bass guitar, he found the ideal guitar in Perfecta condicion. He arrived on Monday and his partner agreed, but ended up cutting the string, which caused Mario to hire a technician and fix his guitar. The repair of the guitar was very expensive but they lowered the price because they were friends. of patricio, who was the son of who repaired the guitar making them lower the price by more than half, and this enthusiasm for Mario, but the problem is that Mario and the repair technician never agreed with the days, which always had Something bad, causing the Tomas to get stressed and move to school at the national institute and stay away from Mario. This is the reason why Mario never repaired his guitar. And he did not become a rock star, which led to depression, interrupting his psychological state and becoming an aggressive person who in the end his parents made the decision to admit him to the Santa Secilia clinic.

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  10. Titulo: Nice week
    Nombres: Camila Aparicio and Gema Segura
    Last week, my brother visited the house of my best friend. He and my brother were playing in the park near to the mall and later my cousin and I, around 3 PM, talked with them and played, football. In the night we went to buy candies. We went to my house and my best friend and I Iistened to reggaeton bands. My brother and my cousin were doing a lot of puzzles. We were in a sleepover. The next day, we went to Fantasilandia. Later, we went to eat pizza and we went back home. In the night, my best friend and my cousin, went back home. My brother and I turned off the music and went to sleep. The next day, my brother went with my mother to buy cookies and candys for my dog. My father and I went to buy toys for my dog. Later, my dog was between the door and the bike. My mother, my father, my brother, my dog and I went to the park and played with the ballon. In the park there was a cat and my dog approached the cat and played with the ballon. Later, the cat went to its house and my dog went with us. We were in my house and my mother sing with my father, my brother with my dog danced and I was happy. In the night, my father and my mother went to the cinema. My brother played in the phone, my dog an I listened music and danced. Later, my father and my mother went back home and the four slept and my dog went to its bedroom and slept. It was a nice day.

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  11. Title: Unrequited Love
    Name: Valeria Torres

    I write this story to be able to let off steam and take out everything that I have carried these months within me, because right now, it causes me a pain that I have never felt before. Despite having suffered many betrayals in love, this has been the worst of all, because for once in my life I thought I had found the person with whom I would share the rest of my life.

    It becames impossible to love a person so much in such a short time, however that happened to me. Never imagined knowing someone and feeling all these things. In just 7 months it has been a wonderful experience, but at the same time so painful.

    With my age I have known what real love is and that you care about someone, so much, that he even respects you, until the very last as if asking you to turn away from your life in order to cope with all this and try to forget. Although right now it is very difficult for that to happen, although I try, the mind betrays me and I do not stop thinking about it, since I get up until I go to bed. The worst thing is that I do no know how I can do it, this has never happened before and the other time I fell in love I knew that the other person did not deserve anything of what I did for him.

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  13. Title: death warrant
    Name: Kate Seguel Tobar and Byron Reyes

    I had my eyes closed when the alarm clock rang. I always awake before, but today, was a special day.
    Things ready and i went out as usual. I would take petunias but this time i chose roses. When i go to where my little pearl , i could feel her precense and i just smiles. Back home, walking quietly i saw him and anger seized me and i almost could not contain. I saved all my strength so i would do to it when the day darken. I arrived at my house and i sat on that sofa. I saw how the clock went by. I could hear every click, clock! for 4 hours. It was an eternity. Then, it was there when it was 9 pm.
    After having everything in place, i went out to start this revenge. While walking that street, i felt how adrenaline was taking over my body. In each, a small memory took hold of me and in that fatal consequence that made my life become a hell that accompanied me until today.
    After walking for a couple of minutes to the house of the damn bastard, i knocked the door as if it was all right. He opened and without thinking twice i shoot him to burning clothes leaving him dead instanly. Then i looked all over the house to his wife and daughter, while i was in the dining room looking for them they more get it to scape and in that i shoot them from the door and finish with both. The blond hair of the two become a color so red that i managed to shine. And , os i hould planned the end was wait, the people on the street ran thinking that it would fire like crazy to them... but not, i put the gun in my mounth and thinking about my little daughter... i tyigged...

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  14. title: Any day
    name:Cristobal Jimenez, Joaquin Ruz

    One day, I was walking with my friend in the park and around there is a museum and we went in to take pictures with the sculptures and then we went to the house of another friend who lives in the salvation sector. When we arrived, the mother told us to leave, I found a square on the right, my friend, and when we arrived, I was on a swing playing with her boyfriend, and since it was busy, we went to the mall that was about 25 minutes away and there we were. We ate hamburgers and then went to the cinema that is right next to the food court, we saw a horror movie, and when we left, it was getting dark that I had to go to take the bus to my house after waiting for a while under the roof of the place I walked among a crowd of people then turn left to take the short way, I went straight ahead and then turn right and came to my house.

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  15. titulo: rehabilitado
    name: Alejandro López Soto
    i was born in te north of Chile, specifically in the center of Antofagasta. I am a loney and abande ned man, my wifwe abandoned me and took one years old son.
    He left me for the reason that i got drunk every day, i never took brooght money to my house, i spent every thing with my friends buying alcohol and left my wife and my son withaut food.
    My wife got bored of me, and one day when i arried at my house i did not find her. She took my son with her actually, she just left me a letter that said that she was going to Santiago to look for new hotizons fora better life.
    Well it´s been a year since he left santiago. Left i quit trainkinig alcohol and i started warking day and night to save money and go to look formy wife and my son. of nthe travel is going to the day arried by bus, it be a long trip of 14 hours, i hope it´s worth it. I hope to find my wife and my son.
    When i arrived in santiago, i was very lost. Idid not know anything, i only hod a paper with an address, the too address of ny in-laws' house, i hope it does not cost me much to get there and hope fully this, there are goingto be wife and my son.
    I arrived at the house of my in-laws, I asked each person who passed by my side, at last I arrived at the address, I knocked on the door, the door opened, my wife opened it but I explained everything for what happened.
    I asked him to please forgive me and to come back to Antofagasta.
    It's been a year since I asked him for that and if he finally forgives me now we live the three happy, without alcohol or anything else just us

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  16. there was once a boy named Pablito who lived in the city of Santiago, he was dating with a girl named Isidora. One day Pablito went to see Isidora and told him that he loved her and that he wanted to be with her for life, then he proposed marriage, she started laughing and sarcastically told him: "We are still small, but I promise you that When we are big, we will have many children and we will get married, so that we can live happily ever after. " The boy looked at her and only said: "I love you" with a face of stunned *. The days passed and one day Isidora arrived sad and crying, Pablito asked him: "What's wrong with you? What's wrong?" and she replied: "My parents are going to separate and I have to go with my mother". Pablito quickly became shocked and only reacted to embrace her, and replied: "I promise to look for you until I meet you and we will be happy at last. Go home and I'll look for you later." Isidora obeyed and went home. The next day Pablito went to look for Isidora at his house and nobody came out. Pablito only began to cry and to tell God that he leaves everything in his hands. Over the years and Pablito could never be with another woman even though they have spent years ... and died waiting for the little love of his life.

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  17. Title: lifetime
    Name: Yenifer Torres
    Llanara Hernández

    there was once a boy named Pablito who lived in the city of Santiago, he was dating with a girl named Isidora. One day Pablito went to see Isidora and told him that he loved her and that he wanted to be with her for life, then he proposed marriage, she started laughing and sarcastically told him: "We are still small, but I promise you that When we are big, we will have many children and we will get married, so that we can live happily ever after. " The boy looked at her and only said: "I love you" with a face of stunned *. The days passed and one day Isidora arrived sad and crying, Pablito asked him: "What's wrong with you? What's wrong?" and she replied: "My parents are going to separate and I have to go with my mother". Pablito quickly became shocked and only reacted to embrace her, and replied: "I promise to look for you until I meet you and we will be happy at last. Go home and I'll look for you later." Isidora obeyed and went home. The next day Pablito went to look for Isidora at his house and nobody came out. Pablito only began to cry and to tell God that he leaves everything in his hands. Over the years and Pablito could never be with another woman even though they have spent years ... and died waiting for the little love of his life.

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  18. Noelia Cárdenas Mora

    The hills
    A young woman dreamed one night that she was walking for a weird path, that climbed a wooded hill whose top was crowned by a little white house sister surrounded by a garden full of red and violet flowers. Unable to hide his pleasure, he knocked on the door of the house, which was finally opened by a very old man with a long white beard.
    At the moment she started talking to him and she woke up.
    All the details of this dream remained so etched in his memory that for several days she did not think of anything else.
    after, she had the same dream three times in succession and always woke up when she was going to start talking to the old man. few weeks later, she was driving to a weekend party. when she pulled the sleeve's driver to stop on the right of the paved road, was the field path of his dream.
    -Wait for me a moment-
    He begged and started walking down the country lane, while his heart beating crazily.

    she was no longer surprised when the road climbed up to the top of the wooded hill and left her before the house whose smallest details she remembered now with such precision. the same old man of his dream responded impatiently to his impatient call.

    -Tell me-she said, is this house for sale?

    -yes, but I do not advise you to buy it, a ghost, my daughter, frequents this house!-said the old man-

    A ghost!!??, who??-said she-

    -You-said the old man and closed the door softly.

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  19. Name: Benicio Lagos And Bastian Aravena
    the other day I was on the empire state building and a black cloud arrived and as we were very high inside the cloud I could not see anything then it occurred to me to light a torch and when I could see a large and robust figure it was like a kind of show which went to me to attack and when it sober me sober my spider man appeared and attacked the mostro but he stopped and started to fight with the then was when I realized that the mostro feared the fire and approached me with the torch and when he saw me he wanted to chase me for having the torch and spiderman told me to run to attack him from behind and be able to defeat him so I started to run and the spiderman created a sort of catapult to give me momentum but it took a long time so while you run I took my T-shirt and burn it with the torch and pull it and the mostro was launched to it to turn it off and there time to rest and when I turn it off I showed him the torch and stop me from a socket so when the lego where my spiderman threw himself and pushed him towards electricity and killed him after that spiderman was going to take off his mask and just at that moment stop sleeping

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  20. Título : The possible vacations of Maria.
    Name: Melissa Cortés

    One day María was sitting in the armchair of her house until the cellphone started ringing. When she saw who it was, she realized that it was her friend named Antonia. When she answered the cellphone, Antonia invited her to go on vacation for 3 weeks, so María responded that she would not know how to answer, since her mother was strict and she did not thank that she would let her go out, specially to stay so long in one strange house. Then, Antonia tells her that his mother had already thought about that and that she could talk to the mother of María so that she would let her go on vacation with her and leave her home for a while because she is always inside her house and almost never go out to have fun. To which María responds; let's see what happens. The phone call ended because her parents arrived from work. The next week, Antonia told María that her mother would talk to her in the afternoon, when the sun goes a little and go with the fresh.
    Afternoon...
    The mother of Antonia went to María's house to be able to tell her about the invitation to the beach. After insisong so much, María's mother agreed, but with the condition that her daughter always answers her cellphone and anything she needs to warn her.
    And that's how María and her friend Antonia are going on vacation for 3 weeks to the beach to enjoy their days off.

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  21. Name: alanis antilaf and valentina videla
    Title: the value of fridship
    Oin tuesday, sofia was on the sidewalk waiting for her friends fernanda to go to the mall to eat ice cream and buy clothes so she could go out to a party on friday.During the day,the two girls enjoyed and had a great time as it was a long time since they did not spend a day together.Around the mall,there was a small square full of young people who were enjoying .They passed and decided to come to make new friends.They sat on the grass to enjoy them,the bay alveady passend and the high cane , the two girls decided to go to their houses to rest.After two days,it was time to go to the party and join several friends to make up and dress well to then , go together to the party.After having arrived at the party, sofia met her ex-boyfriends , wno was whit another gril dancing. A the time of seeing them , sofia become sad and decided to go dabcing with her friends to forget what she had seen and keep having fun After that, the grils came to each other's house and from that day they started spending a lot of time together. At seven in the morning , they went to school together until one day there was a very loud discussion by a boy who just wanted them to separate and he got it because the grils did not wnat to see each other again . After many years of nut talking, the grils met when they were twenty eight years old . Being mature and having a family, they talked things over and they were young.

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