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  1. George Adventures

    Names: Manuel Aguilar, Brian Reyes.

    George is a cute macaque from the Brazilian jungle. A day playing in this tree saw as other macaques speaking, George approached to talk to know what thy were talking. The macaques reacted violently and told him to get agaway if he did not want to meet the death. George left sadly from the place thinkin about what he had gone. Spend a week until he returned to see the macaques but this time they needed help, they were being attacked by a human and their knife. George when we see them in danger was quickly to help. He quit then knife to the human and he use to defend them. The human when seeing that George had removed the knife unforseeing manner, the human desperately took the companion macaque. George to see that follow the human for several minutes until we get to buks that were in the surroundings of the population, after searching them around the garbage, he finds the human attempted strangle his companion macaque. George when we see them in that situation begins to drastily in date it's adrenaline, causing it to se placed behind the human without this to realize and take from the hair and them with the knife and cut the neck after seeing that the macaque parther presents George telling him that he is called Franco and that is responsability of planning the crimes. After having submitted, Franco presents a dealer to George to join his criminal band. George when see in a complicated situation, he accepts the offer.

    After this George was recognized as one of the most dangers macaques of all Brazil, being persecuted by the police until they were captured and coverted into a macaque soup. The End.

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  2. The first time at paradise
    By: Alexandro Guzmán and David Nahuelman

    This was a long time back, on my birthday as a gift, my father took me to the stadium. That was a very exciting moment, because I was never in a studium in my life and for geing the first time, was feeling like stay in the paradise. See the drums and cymbals, the chants of the crowd, the players playing with claw and heart, that was a really beatiful moment and Im so grateful with my father for giving me the opportunity to meet that wonderful place. That place so fantastic that I said is the Estadio Monumental, of the most greatest soccer team of Chile, Colo-Colo, and I'm feeling so good to tell you my experience, so, if you have never been in a stadium, you will feel the same that me. But all the beautiful have a ugly part, at the way back to home, a car, which was driven by a rival team fan, ran over me. Later a hours I wake up in a hospital. Sadly and unfortunately, now I'm in a wheelchair and my life has changed a lot since that day and also the way that I encourage to the team during the matches, because, sometimes, the stadium is full, totally filled and that make that I can't see the matches how I want. But there's something has not changed, and that is the emotion and the feeling at the time when I'm in that place. Anything what happens, the wheelchair, being blind, even the dead, nothing will change the feeling and the love that I feel for the club

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  3. "The Demond Brothers"
    Jorge Urrea and Felipe campos

    A long time ago the hell and the heaven had a long, brutal and unstoppable war, in the war, they used the mortals like pauns, one day, a group of humans go to the hell for fight whit the demonds, they passed for cruel, painful, unbarable and exhausting tests to get to the end of the hell and kill the demond in hir castle of fire, they finally fight with the demond in a epic battle only four brothers survive and they drong the blood of the demond like a symbol of victory, but that gave them habilities, the first brother got super strengh, the second got the power of toughen his hole body like a stone, the thrid brother can shoot fire from his hands and the last brother got the immortality, after of the victory they went to the heaven, but nobody accept them, all on the heaven said they were monsters like the demond and the heaven expelled then in shame, they search help with the mortals, his friend, and his familiy looked at then mistake or a danger and try kill them, the brother, with sorrows in their souls, walk around the world, but nobody help then, everybody said they dont't deserve live, the brother tired of the people, they went to on a cave, where they hidden until today, anybody knows where is the cave, but its the better, the brother left all the respect they had for the people, now they only hate all those who are not themselves.

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  4. The elf
    Tomas rodriguez and Asael muñoz

    there were once two children, one was a boy and the other was a girl and their names were Marisol and asael they were going for a walk with their families because they are very close together, they went to the forest to camp for a week,the first days they came to order the tents and clothes, while ordering the children went out to explore the forest and found an abandoned hut of centuries ago, the curious children went to investigate and they found a goblin / the two young people as allthink that these beings are good but nobody knew that this was evil, at the time it felt attacked by which began to attack with its magic the two young people felt bad with desire to vomit the two traveled to the underworld where they saw what could not imagine people who suffered they escaped but could not find the way had to face their deceased loved ones and they succeeded after that night they woke up together with a stuffed goblin which they never wanted to see again, pasa es the daysand they were still traumatized, the parents worried because the children did not want to leave their tents, so they told them what had happened to them in their walk, they said that in the dream they found a cabin with an elf that came from hell and that they took to the underworld and they saw all their relatives dead, the parents concerned about the children decided to go to a psychologist and the place was in Pudahuel, the young people returned to the place where they saw the goblin to faceit to stop the nightmares and the insomnia were armed with sticks and stones, when they arrived they [heard a macabre laugh, and behind a tree they saw something running, they fearful said who goes there and the elf went out and the friends no longer fearedtheir adult mentality did not make them afraid which the goblin disappeared and they never saw him appear again

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  5. Pet love
    Constanza Treupil

    His white legs are tired. The weight of his little bones does not let him lift his old hairy body. His white fur became thin and opaque. He had almost no teeth and he no longer has the same energy as a couple of years ago.
    When Jack took him carefully in his arms, he knew that he would go to that place with the smell of medicine, cold and uncomfortable.
    He enjoyed feeling the smell of Jack, a rare mixture between ginger bread cookies and orange, he felt protected in his arms. Then he remembered that cold and sad day, when his formers owners left him in the middle of the road. His fur got wet right away with the rain falling furiously on the asphalt. The sadness served his small body. He was alone in a place he did not know and his puppy belly claimed for milk. He wandered for hours, walking without any direction. Then, he came and tucked him in his strong arms, with a sad expression, just as he is doing now. His eyelids became heavy and he let himself be carried away by the happiness that Jack felt.
    When he opened his eyes, he was on a hard and cold table. He felt a little picket and concentrate for the last time on the sad face of Jack, soaked in tears. I try to transmit all love and affection he felt for him all the time they were together and then he let himself, be carried by a warn current, leaving his body.

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  6. Viaje a la playa
    Gabriel vergara
    Pedro lorca


    a weekend we decided with my family to go to the
    beach which we were 5 people in a vehicle, the vehicle
    was white took approximately two hours to reach
    reäaca, we decided to stay for the whole weekend I rent
    a cabin located in the coastal side of the beach, from
    the balcony of the house of the cabin you could see the
    sea and watch the sunset, spending hours shopping at
    the supermarket, we bought food to eat a delicious
    dinner by the beach, next day we got up to go to eat in
    Valparaiso, we had a delicious seafood lunch after
    lunch we went for a ride in a boat in which we had a tour
    that was very entertaining with my family, to end the day
    we decided to go to a park of amusements that was
    located next to the beach in that amusement park there
    were games such as: bumper cars, roller coaster,
    carousels, etc.

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  7. The cow of widsom
    Benjamín Díaz, Camila Lizama and Matías Silva.

    On the streets of Santiago centro there was Harold Vader sitting right next to the subway at noon, drinking soda. Suddenly, fast as a man with diarrhea, his friend Simon appears running swiftly through the people. Harold, noticing him, calms him down and asks him "softly":

    -Good damn! Simon! What did happen?!
    -You won't believe me! I saw something awful- He responded.
    -Tell me.
    -Okay, I'll tell you. I was peacefully watering the plants of my neighbour's garden on the celling and then a freaking milk storm falls and the god of the cows appeared just behind me! After that he told me "I'm going to leave all the world without oxygen, waking all the black cows from the barns eat each plants on the whole planet. But you can challenge me to a duel, I'll be at the school, a few hours after noon". And you know what je did then?
    -What?
    -He offered me cereal with milk, he's a very nice man.
    -Dude! He's going to destroy this planet! And you care abour a simplish breakfast?
    -I was hungry, man.
    -We need to stop him! Also, how I didn't notice the milk storm from earlier?
    -It was just on my apartament.
    -Oh. Ok, now let's go to the school to defeat him!

    Both, Harold and Simon headed to their school quickly. At the main entrance, they saw the towering man with black eyes and a skin of ghostly white.

    -You! -Screamed loudly Harold pointing at the tall man standing before them.
    -Who? Me? - He said.
    -Yes you!
    -It wasn't me
    -What?
    -What?
    -We're here to stop you from destroying the world.
    -No, you can't do that.
    -Yes, I can. -He stops him.
    -Oh no, he stopped me.

    After that, the cow starts floating non-stop todwards the sky and through space.

    The end.

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  8. Survival
    Francisca Villarroel, Ayleen Huenchun
    Our first day: we were so lost, we had been in the forest for about a week, after our plane crashed near the sea, leaving us with no food, much less water, so we decided to do something for us until someone came to save us.
    The first mission: Was look for an animal to eat. What would? how we do it? many question and we had no answer. We share the fear with my partner of kill a helpless animal, we had ever done it before. Was that or starve. We did it and eat. After that we found a where bears live, we talked to them and they let us stay. But their good Will lasted until the night they tried to ectu us, we could not trust anymore! we run away from that place without l saw my life go by, for a second looked at my partner falling next to me and that's when i wake up of my nightmare. Nothing had been real, although it felt like it was, I was confused and call my partner to tell him the crazy dream I had, she agreed with me, maybe it was the product of playing many video games and a lot of television, they were affecting me. I would have to solve it, I've had many strange dreams, but now time to go back to sleep.

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  9. The stole of milk
    Cristian cisterna Josué Solorza
    A little boy with super Powers was fighting with a Magic cat with lasers breaks and a heavy machine gun with infinite ammo and grenade launcher.
    The figth was began in the city because a bad dog stole the cat's milk and their fish. The cat starts to destroy the city and the little boy was trying yo protect the city with it's amazing Powers of imagination with is partner the little Timmy. They tried to stop to the Magic cat with imaginary milk, but the cat got so angry because the bad dog was drinking his original milk.
    The cat set a bomb in the city, threathing the people of the city for milk and some food. The little boy asked to the people for some cat food and milk, the civilian's give all the milk and the cat food to the Magic cat meanwhile little Timmy was defusing the bomb and saved the city but bad dog attacks again the cat; our little boy and little Timmy figth againts the dog and together figth for the security of the city everyday.
    Carlos awakes from his Drean and says himself: i Will leave the drugs for a while.

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  10. a common day
    alan toledo, victor silva

    Like all day one friday, alan and victor sit together in the room in the first hours of classes, Like all the mornings, they make 2 loaves of tomato and mayo same amount of breads that are 2, but, it is different because we never get tired of that, In the second hour of classes we decided to go to buy coffee and in that we bought we went to the room and we sat down again together and just for breakfast we shared our breads and the bread did not last lees than 20 minutes, In those classes we did not do anything we just ate and nothing else, Then, with victor, we decided to organize to go to san diego (to san diego street) just to go buy some materials that were asked inamodule of our telecomunications aspeciality, The good things is that we left and in that course we went on the subway. We bought a chocolate that was delicious, It was a long trip but at least we arrived and in that we mined more than 20 minutes because we strayed super far, Each one put his part to buy the materials... that´s were we got to the place we bought and we went super cheap in that until victor silver and we decided to go to a restaurant and we ate potato with meat and I had something unpleasant that at the end of the meal I went to the bathroom and there was no comfort and victor recoded me but thst video I eliminated, That food was esquisite.

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  11. -New beginning
    -Diego Cabezas and Josue Morales

    It all began on March 13, 2018, that dark and cold day, a cloudy night

    my friend recommended me a high school workshop which did not interest me... but I wanted to try something new and it looked a little showy, i took my little cell phone and decided to call it to give it a specific response, to be able to include myself in a new environment

    the next day, I was nervous in class, feeling again this feeling of anxiety and fear I did not know if it was good or bad, I just wanted to go in to go in to not feel bad, much less uncomfortable.

    When it was time to enter the room,I began to sweat and get upset,but suddenlya young man arrived amd told me to introduce mydelf... since then my whole world changet, I began to feel confortable and to take confidence with all the new friendships that I was creating. My personality increased in an extraordinary way and I realized that I was able to do many thing.

    After adapting, a time passed and we received a news from the teacher... we would give our first play.

    With the days we prepared ourselves and made an effort so that the day of the presentation everything went well,I wanted to impress the teacher and my classmater,so I practiced enough alone to be able to improve myself.

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  12. "The man black in the beach"
    Marco Campos - Renato Avalos - Diego Salinas
    - Once, a black went to the beach. The beach was very dirty but so dirty that the water 100 ked black and the black man could not bathe and people stanted to leave the place. The black man itill wanted to go into the water but he could not because the water was very dirty. It turns out that after awhile the man got sick and fell very badly in bed and had to lie down for 3 weeks taking honey and coffee 3 weeks later, he managed to get out of bed and, in these days, the go vern ment was working to clean the beaches so the man wanted to so in the Project to clean it you can bathe calmly. The project started and the people who would like to jain the man went to register with much paide amd happiness because they are going to clean the beach. The man, when he went to register, he was told he had to have an identity card but he did not bring it so he had to go to his house to duning the course, he san that many people were sig ning up. Then, he man to his house so as not to be left out of the Project.
    Once the arrived at his house, he began to look for his identity and, he found it in the second drawes of his chest that is nex to his bed. He grabbed it and went running to the registhation to participate in the project an when he arrived, he signed up and stanted the project.

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  13. Integrantes: Nicolás Salinas

    The glory that blinds ti the truth

    Everything started a nice day, quietly was the briggest goddness of the heavenfy sun, ir was called celeste, while the smallest little sister was in His room observing the inhabitants by His Window, he was the goddness of the moon he was called moon rose, she noticed some certain inguiry of love for her to the people of course that she would ser igual any inhabitant of the small town that had managed to keep it up, althought no one was walking in the nights that simply did nota like it, althought she prefer to keep the people calm it Is not said anything the oldest watched palace that both had in the clouds, she kept walking until,You Reach the room of the smallest and touch the door

    The smallest a bit annoyed, His sister's sister said "it's open can enter", she entered and saw her younger sister, with His hands back and seemed to him, he told him with a sotf and sweet voice, "hearing sister i...eh state thinking thinking and i wanted ti ask you if you could forgive me", the younger sister was a little confusing foto those words and decided to ask him, "ti which you mean, you do not have yo apologíze, you have not done anything wrong! You know?"

    "Of course I did and you know I really have a way of how to pay you?" said the older sister and the younger said that idea in mind which she had, is listening and the older sister decided to make what she asked for the youngest one, since every year, a lunar goddess is venerated and celebrates a carnival which content and reconciled with her sister lived happily with her for eternity

    Fin

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  14. Names: Jeremy olguin and Christian Hatte.


    ´´An aventure to betrayal´´

    Somewhere of the world two friends that they appreciated a lot they were walking quite for center the santiago and they looked at the showcase the highest one was called roberto wich had a girlfriend, teh lowest one was called andres wich is single.
    Very often roberto went out with his girldfriend whit andres, the girldfirend of roberto shakira flirted with andres even flirted for whatsapp.
    One day roberto i superted andres which had a great discussion, when the discussion was over they took a while, shakira disillusioned by being unfaithful loved both, Disillusioned roberto decided to go to bar to take manquehuito and andres was there in the same bar as roberto taking black vodka after a while joaquin, discovers andres with shakira in a near park, after joaquin to see a andres, called roberto without knowing the situation was a surprired, in a desesperated two thieves stole his cell phone and roberto could not hear well what he meant , he kept it in mind, after spending a two months shakira cheated a andres, so sad andres that he could not bear to commit suicide, roberto to know he happened and with the resentment of his heart decided to help andres, Andre standing on the waterfront at verg of launching roberto arrived to give him a big hug he told him for the reasons that he had to live for the one who wanted him very much and that they were never again to break the friend of their friendship and so they forgave each other, starting the great frindship they would have for their live.

    The End.

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  15. "Friend enemies"

    Name: Jonathan Cuevas.
    Bryan Patiño.

    A winter day, between 3 and 4 in the afternoon after studying in a day very extensive, all students are going to their homes.

    They walked down the street. Next to the Monkey Warrior, there was his best friend. He always walks to take the bus and, as was usual, the conversation was relaxed and passive. time to time, the environment changed and the silence wrapped the streets.

    The Monkey Warrior friend was strange and his friend asked, "What happened with you?" The Monkey answered slowly; All changes the time. The best friend monkey warrior had betrayed him telling that again he had spoken with the person which he betrayed his fried.


    The monkey Warrior did not accept the hypocrisy of his best friend who left him alone. The next day, It started the new day of classes again together but nothing was the same things. The poor Monkey Warrior was alone, looking how his best friend betrayed him speaking the person that his friend swore not to do it everyagain. It was so munch anger that the Monkey Warrior faced telling to his friend why had such a thing, he did not give explanation from that, leaving behind the friendship that they ever had.😔

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  16. Name: Betsabet Lizana and Nicolas Lagos

    "The frog uncontrolled"

    There was a little happy frog that lived in a broad and comfortable sheet that he often shared with his friends, and that he had known for a long time. The little frog, called Mariana, was kind and very happy. To parties in that magical swamp. She always accepts and arrives accomanied by her two faithful friends because deep down in her heart shr knew that her friend wauld never leave he alone they were to the very happy untel an obligator, named julian appeared and asked thern where they could frind food.
    Mariana and her frightened friend pulled themselves aut of fear and julian wandered why they had gone that way. His friend respond we are afraid of alligator because of our childhood there wa an alligator who was the owner of the amusemener park of us it was our dream to be able to go the games Julian he asks mariana for forgiveness for appearing out of nowhere the next day he returcos to look like julian with some strange keys very surprised memo friends ask him what that is, and julian says they are they keys to my old job that was the amusement park; mariana and her friends surprised by the words of julian. Julian opens the amusement park with ombarrassment asks forgiveness, the friends of memo and mariana are happy to see expeded for a long time

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  17. my first time in fantasilandia

    names: Alex Arenas and Beatriz De Oliveira

    according to what i remember. that day was great and crazy, i think it was one of the best days of my life. That day i was with three friends, but i was the only one who had never gone to fantasilandia i only knew him for photos and videos. I was impacted for a couple of seconds when i see the amount of games the heights and the way they were those games.

    At the time of getting into mi first game i felt a great adrenaline and nervousness throghout my body wich was at the time i climbed, from that moment everything was happiness and madness that i did not want to end ever

    After getting on my firts game, i got on the best i could, i even repeated the games with my friends, we made the most of the day except the moment we stopped to go to lunch and rest for a moment, but it was not much, it was about thirty minutes aproximately, due to this after a couple of games i started to get dizzy and went to the bathroom to vomit, but this did not stop me from having a good time. We also went to the house of terror and as we ran we stumbled u pon my friends adn we all fell togeter, we were very sore

    At the end the day, the father of one my friends picked us up and took us to our homes and as soon as he arrived at mine i began to tell him about the experience, show photos and videos to my parents of everything we did in the day and sinse it happened very well, i convinced my parents to go tofantasilandia all together and have a nice afternoon

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